NeeKnight's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hungry Monster]

Not bad

Mildly entertaining. The secret was pretty silly too. Try something more complex, like letting the user pick what the monster will do.

[The Last Hope (episode 1)]

Definite potential

Like BigDobbyo said, some of the text spilled off of the frame. Check your published screen size, decrease the font size, or split the text into two lines.

I thought the scene with the dogs was funny, it seemed kinda random. Well done, but the episode ended just as I was getting interested. I look forward to more, longer episodes.

KaleDuro responds:

shit stupid mistake :P

[Blam Another Day]

Sweet

Great flash, it shows what you can accomplish when artists put time into their movies. Graphics were awesome (you must have a lot of free time, just wait until you get to high school ;)

Suggestion: Work on the sound. Adjust each wave file so that they have relatively the same volume. Some of the voices were way to quiet and some were too loud. They should all be at about the same level. Music shouldn't be too loud when there is dialogue, even with subtitles.

Overall: quite good. Clock lovers should be proud.

VanilllaCokeClock responds:

Hey, thanks alot, I realy appreciate that!