monkyboy29's pretty harsh
This wasn't so bad. It wasn't a real movie, but it was a decent showcase of non-stick animation. You've shown you've got some skilz, now you just need to make a cohesive flash movie. Good luck.
monkyboy29's pretty harsh
This wasn't so bad. It wasn't a real movie, but it was a decent showcase of non-stick animation. You've shown you've got some skilz, now you just need to make a cohesive flash movie. Good luck.
kthxbye!
Enough's enough!
Ever since the lock legion decided to play the game everything's spiraled out of control. People are using these groups as excuses to flood the portal with pathetic collections of short garbage instead of investing their time and effort into lengthier pieces of quality.
Some of your entries have the marks of talent on them (though some obviously did not). If you guys are gonna make a name for yourselves you're going to do something more than a 5 second loop. Some of you have talent (the others still need practice), so use it. Try harder and you will be rewarded.
REPENT
Don't take this the wrong way but...
SevenStar should get hit more often! I usually hate SS stuff since most of it's lazily slapped together, but this was decent. I mean, much of it had obviously no effort invested in it, but some of it wasn't too bad. But seriously, I'm sure SevenStar appreciates your support. I hope he's alright.
lol, this review was fun :)
Well done!
I loved it. That was a nice twist on sprite movies. The music was perfect. And the way the reel ran out at the end was a nice touch. One thing though, in the middle, the dialog flashed quickly and often, giving me a bit of a headache. Other than that, great job!
Sorry to hear of your pain, NeeKnight. I'm glad you liked the movie otherwise.
Very slick
A nice change of pace for a sprite film. Very well animated and very smooth. The tweened walking added a little humor to it, but didn't make the movie look too cheesy. One thing that bugged me was that the movie wasn't cropped properly, you could see past the bars on the top and bottom. Other than that, it was great. I'd love to see the next part!
yeah sorry about that problem, i've put it right though. Thanks for the review :)
Well done!
That was great. Nice action sequences and a little comedy too. Well drawn, well animated, and original. Reminded me of "Battle Chess" for my old Atari ST back in the good ol' days... Keep up the good work!
Oh, and the preloader was good and all, but it might look better if you tween a layer mask over the fill for the pawn instead of tweening the actual fill. That way the outline will fill up as the movie loads.
Thanks SO FREAKIN' MUCH.
I was trying to figure out how to do that, but I just gave up. That seriously helps a lot. Thanks.
Very well done
Good flash with good points. Hopefully, people will learn a lesson from this. You have done Newgrounds a great public service. I thank you.
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Very well done
Graphics were beautiful. This flash movie was incredibly well done. It was humerous too. My one suggestion is to increase the framerate. Everything looks like it's in slow motion. A higher framerate would speed it up and make it look realer and more fluid. Keep up the good work.
Ive gotten a few comment about speeding up my framerate, Ill be doing that from now on.
I've learned a lot about animation and programming over the years, but wish I had more time to practice...
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