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Nice

Drawings were very well done, I know how long it takes to draw in flash. I know it was a comic, but a full film with sounds and voice acting would be amazing.

If you want to stick with the comic look, you might want to use more looping movie-clip-things. The hair in the wind was good. You could have also made the waves move and could have had random birds fly in the background, etc.

There were also a few grammatical/spelling mistakes. It didn't ruin the flash, but it was a bit distracting. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for not using sticks!

I hate people who post crap and say that it's their first attempt and expect it not to be blammed. This was pretty good for a first attempt. Try a longer movie with a plot, and it will score better.

Nice

A well done short. Not much background for the plot, but it didn't really hurt the movie.

Not bad, but...

This teaser would have scored better if it had more substance. The background was also too dark. The excessive shadows made it difficult to see the character and read the words. Some words could be barely made out. Although, this shouldn't be a problem in the actual episode. Good luck.

Okay

Graphics and style were good, but there was no plot, dialogue, or purpose (I gave you 2 humor points because it's funny that you took credit for the script and ideas). You also took credit for "actionscript" when you used a NG preloader and managed to screw it up.

Put more plot into your next movie, make it longer, and it could turn out pretty good.

anonymousjim responds:

There is no need for a plot or story when it is just a test to gather symbols and effects and bring the together in a suspensful sequence to prepare for the real animation wich will be Ninpou.

Hmmm...

You do have a point. It makes me sad that NG viewers vote without watching the movies. I'm not sure how to vote, but since the flash has no actual content, I guess I have to vote low. But you've already proved your point, so good job (and bad job to all you viewers who vote without watching the movies!!!)

Not bad

Much better than those stupid stick boarding movies. It might also make a good game.

Bravo!

It was simple, yet funny and well animated. I'm glad to see that there are still people that refuse to tack 1 meg songs onto 10k flashes. I appreciate the small filesize, I have dialup :( The film itself was very well done. Good job

I must admit...

I usually hate people resubmitting blammed work, but you at least made a sequel. I actually found both flashes to be pretty funny. Good luck on future films.

Very nice

The plot's a little weird, but the movie was well done. The loops for the running were a little choppy, but I liked it over all.

I've learned a lot about animation and programming over the years, but wish I had more time to practice...

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Software Engineer

UC Irvine

California

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