NeeKnight's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Raspberrybeard the Pirate]

Nice work

I love pineapples! That was pretty good. Random, but funny too. It's a pitty that you stopped making flash movies.

Macaroni-Penguin responds:

I made my last one last night and will upload it tomorrow since I can only upload two a day.

[Bushido 1]

Okay

Graphics and style were good, but there was no plot, dialogue, or purpose (I gave you 2 humor points because it's funny that you took credit for the script and ideas). You also took credit for "actionscript" when you used a NG preloader and managed to screw it up.

Put more plot into your next movie, make it longer, and it could turn out pretty good.

anonymousjim responds:

There is no need for a plot or story when it is just a test to gather symbols and effects and bring the together in a suspensful sequence to prepare for the real animation wich will be Ninpou.

[The Last Hope (episode 1)]

Definite potential

Like BigDobbyo said, some of the text spilled off of the frame. Check your published screen size, decrease the font size, or split the text into two lines.

I thought the scene with the dogs was funny, it seemed kinda random. Well done, but the episode ended just as I was getting interested. I look forward to more, longer episodes.

KaleDuro responds:

shit stupid mistake :P

[Blam Another Day]

Sweet

Great flash, it shows what you can accomplish when artists put time into their movies. Graphics were awesome (you must have a lot of free time, just wait until you get to high school ;)

Suggestion: Work on the sound. Adjust each wave file so that they have relatively the same volume. Some of the voices were way to quiet and some were too loud. They should all be at about the same level. Music shouldn't be too loud when there is dialogue, even with subtitles.

Overall: quite good. Clock lovers should be proud.

VanilllaCokeClock responds:

Hey, thanks alot, I realy appreciate that!