That was great! Graphics were very simple, but the animation was very fluid. Voice acting was good and I loved the random sense of humor. Aaaaand, I'm impressed that you guys not only know what an interabang is, but you named your frickin' band after it!!! Keep up the good work =D
Not really flash, but...
A superb piece of music and animation! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see more from you. =D
You definately have what it takes to make a nice fbf movie. This was pretty good for an experiment, but you should really sit down and make a full animation with a real plot, characters, etc. Also, you need to turn up the framerate (16 or 18 fps at least). FBF with a slow framerate looks sloppy. A high framerate means more frames to draw, which means more work, but it pays off. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you.
A decent start...
Animation's fairly smooth, shows definate potential. However, you're missing a basic element of action movies: action! Your hero just kinda walks around shooting people. They offer no resistance and there's little excitement. Notice how Krinkels' fight scenes involve many guys, all fighting at the same time. There is no excitement when no one challenges the protagonist. But you show potential so keep at it. Good luck!
It's obvious that you spent some time on this flash, so you get some respect for that. Your animation could use some polishing though. DentedDementia had some good points. Also, your walking animation looked kinda choppy and awkward. Increasing the framerate will require a lot more work from you, but it'll make it look a lot better too.
So all in all, not bad for someone who's still getting a feel for it. You've got potential, and with a little more experience I think you could make some pretty slick stuff. Keep practicing and trying new things. Good luck!
Wow, thanks for the review.
monkyboy29's pretty harsh
This wasn't so bad. It wasn't a real movie, but it was a decent showcase of non-stick animation. You've shown you've got some skilz, now you just need to make a cohesive flash movie. Good luck.
Don't give yourself such a hard time. You can draw, and that's a big plus around here. Your animation skills are not awesome yet, but they're pretty good. It will take more time and practice to reach your full potential though. The opening was pretty funny too. Good voice acting. Keep up the good work, we'd love to see more from you =)
A decent start
Not bad, but it could use some polishing. Sound for one. You have the lip synching, so add some sound for it to synch to. And at various parts, the movie isn't cropped properly so you see floating black boxes at the top and bottom (you should really watch the movie before/after you submit it). And what's the deal with the green skintones?
All in all, shows potential. Keep practicing and you might be able to produce some pretty good stuff. Good luck.
Showed effort, shows potential. One tip: when rotating symbols, move the pivot point (the filled white dot) to produce more realistic movements (rotate arms at shoulder joints, etc). Keep up the good work!
Ever since the lock legion decided to play the game everything's spiraled out of control. People are using these groups as excuses to flood the portal with pathetic collections of short garbage instead of investing their time and effort into lengthier pieces of quality.
Some of your entries have the marks of talent on them (though some obviously did not). If you guys are gonna make a name for yourselves you're going to do something more than a 5 second loop. Some of you have talent (the others still need practice), so use it. Try harder and you will be rewarded.
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